Oi you literrati - I've a book in me somewhere -

Comments/criticism please on this for an opening:-

"The final curtain was drawn, by a tired and trembling hand, only two people would ever know what would take place that night, or that minute, at the end of the day in that house. But then, that was not true, for there would be a third person listening and watching what they were doing. It would be me, dear reader, and in the following lines, sentances, paragraphs and pages I will be reporting back to you on what I saw and, what I heard that night."

Gordon Writing